LOST

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    • EG3RED
    • HAVE NOT BEEN HERE IN A WHILE BUT I AM BACK AND I SHALL HAVE NEW POEMS UP SOON!

    LOST

    ONE EARLY MORNING I WAKE UP BRAIN STORMING.

    IN RETROSPECT THINGS WHERE SO GREAT.

    NOW ALL I CAN THINK IS HOW DO I FIX THIS MESS.

    THE LOVE OF MY LIFE IS NO LONGER MY LOVE.

    AND WITH HER NEGLECT I FALL DEEPER IN THOUGHTS.

    ALL I WANT IS FOR THINGS TO BE NORMAL.

    BUT HOW CAN THAT BE IF MY THINKING IS NOT NORMAL.

    UNUSUAL THOUGHTS LINGER MY HEAD.

    AND ONCE AGAIN I REMAIN IN SUSPENSE.

    MY FUTURE IS LOST AND MY HEART IS TORN.

    THIS IS JUST ONE CRAZY STORM.

    HOPE IT PASSES BY WITHOUT FURTHER DUE.

    CAUSE IF IT DON'T I WONT KNOW WHAT TO DO.

    NIGHT AND DAYS JUST SEEM SO DULL.

    COLOR HAS LOST IT'S TASTE AND I FEEL ALL ALONE.

    RIDING THIS STORM OUT WITH JUST THE HOPE.

    THAT THINGS WILL GET BACK TO WHERE IS JUST ALL LOVE.

    THINGS WHERE GREAT, THINGS WHERE GOOD.

    NOW I SIT HERE NOT KNOWING WHAT TO DO.

    DAYS HAVE PASSED AND STILL I CRY.

    I'VE SHED SO MUCH TEARS I JUST RAN DRY.

    MY LOVE PLEASE COME BACK AND DON'T BE LATE.

    CAUSE I WONT CONTINUE LIVING LIFE TILL THAT DAY.

     

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    Sydney commented on LOST

    02-21-2010

    this is very sorrowful. i like the flow. i can understand where youre coming from. your poem shows your emotions that youve weaved into this. - Sydney

    KING commented on LOST

    02-18-2010

    Ouch! Yeah.. ungh, pretty deep man. No words i say will heal what pain you may be suffering I do hope that it works out for you in a way that you can again find love and joy within you.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

    EG3RED’s Poems (11)

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    A BEAUTIFUL NEW BEGINNING WITH YOU! 1
    WHY YOU'RE SO SPECIAL 1
    LOST 2
    THE WAY LOVE MAKE'S LIFE SO MISERABLE 3
    LOVE AND MY INTERPRETATIO
    N OF IT!
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    LOVE IS FOR FOOLS AND I AIN'T NO FOOL! 3
    I LOVE THE FACT. 4
    JUST SOMETHING I HAD TO GET OUT. 3
    THE FUNNY THING ABOUT LOVE 3
    I TOLD YOU I LOVE YOU 1
    THE FORCE OF LOVE BEHOLDS THE TRUTH 6