THE WAY LOVE MAKE'S LIFE SO MISERABLE

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    • EG3RED
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    THE WAY LOVE MAKE'S LIFE SO MISERABLE

     TODAY I SIT HERE IN PAIN, DROWNING IN SORROW.

    I WONDER WHAT NOW I CAN HOPE FOR TOMORROW.

    IN SUSPENSE I REMAIN UNTIL THINGS TAKE THEIR PLACE.

    BUT LIVING LIKE THIS, I WOULD MUCH RATHER BE DEAD.

    YET I STILL HAVE HOPE AND STAY DETERMINE TO WIN.

    EVEN IN THIS MISERY I AM STILL WILLING TO LIVE.

    HOW MUCH OF THIS TORTURE AM I WILLING TO WITHSTAND.

    WHEN ALL MY LOVE IS WASHING AWAY IN SAND.

    CONSIDERING MY CIRCUMSTANCES I LOVE MY LIFE.

    AND EVEN TILL THIS DAY I WOULD MAKE HER MY WIFE.

    I JUST HAVE TO WAIT TILL THE TIME IS RIGHT. 

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    Sydney commented on THE WAY LOVE MAKE'S LIFE SO MISERABLE

    02-21-2010

    this is really good. hope things work out. this has really evolved. this is a wonderful poem. -Sydney
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    EG3RED

    02/21/2010

    YEAH IT HAS ALREADY WE ARE IN GOOD STANDING!

    KING commented on THE WAY LOVE MAKE'S LIFE SO MISERABLE

    02-18-2010

    Your feelings you put them all there for all to see. I wonder if your lost love knows of your talent to write. Perhaps in that, hope can bring u back together or take you to other avenues of life. Good piece man!
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    EG3RED

    02/21/2010

    THANK YOU!

    queeniecup commented on THE WAY LOVE MAKE'S LIFE SO MISERABLE

    02-18-2010

    Imagine how many people will be able to empathize with these words!!! Very good rendition of emotions.
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    EG3RED

    02/21/2010

    THANK YOU!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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