Lost

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    Lost

     always changing
    never knowing
    what direction
    I am going
    life will always twist and bend
    rise and fall
    there are many paths on which to fall
    but I'll never stop
    even far after I'm gone
    always changing, never still
    I will always have the will
    to push harder and go further than done before...

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    lillyrain commented on Lost

    05-23-2009

    Wow this one is really good to short to the point but still poetic in every line and in the whole verse.
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