Love can be so weak..

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    Love can be so weak..

    There's a knife in my heart, slowly ripping it apart,
    I should've known from the start, your intentions where to part,
    the feelings within my heart.

    I should've known when you told me you loved me,
    I should've known when you told me you care,
    that your intentions were to never be there.

    Things started off so good, then I noticed where she stood.
    At the window of your heart, like a shadow of a shark.
    Waiting to tare us apart.

    Then she got smart, as she found that part.
    To the bandage of your heart, as she slowly pried it part.

    Athough I gottah say, I still want you to stay.
    But it seems as though, your being tossed to and fro.
    All I want is for our hearts to glow.

    Even it glows seperate ways, always know, you had me in a daze.

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    Weatherstone commented on Love can be so weak..

    12-06-2008

    One of your best, I think, great flow and use of picture language to "paint" your feelings and thoughts. A couple spelling errors to check: "tare" - "tear" and "gottah" - "gotta'", but other than that I really like this one.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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