Love so Deep

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    Love so Deep

    If she only knew

    The pain she caused

    When she played with my heart

    She played the game until she was left on top

    Not knowing I was actually falling for her

    She has the perfect personality that I love to be around

    And the perfect smile I wish I had

    I'm gone from your life without letting you know

    How much you really mean to me

    Your'e my world,

    You're my everything,

    I just wish you would see

    That you mean so much to me

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    Teardrops commented on Love so Deep

    12-23-2009

    smiple and to the point good read and great flow

    Gibbz commented on Love so Deep

    12-23-2009

    i liked it. it was good. um u explained everything nicely....

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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