LOVE

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    LOVE

    Love Obviously Vverifies Everyone.

    If only the world could come to love..

    love every man, every woman

    regardless of their believes-their choices

    If everyone could come together to believe in this one issue

    this one centeredness

    then the world would be a better place.

    Regardless of race, sex or religion we are all the same-we are all human

    so...lets be humane

    Come together...come all..lets make a stand...we shall not fall

    Forgive your neighbor, forgive everyone that does not believe the things for which you take a stand.

    Understand differences and expect them to be..

    Resort back to love an hurt not thee.

    If all could live my this great command

    we could save the world and save our land

    jlh

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    charmlessman2d commented on LOVE

    03-24-2010

    love can be both crushing and rewarding. its both a curse and a dream come true. love how you try to tackle the subject and explain it through your eyes. it makes the world go round and has us spinning in circles. so goodjob for taking it on in such brilliant song.
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    wildpendigus commented on LOVE

    08-05-2009

    Very good vergood, I like it I wish I could look you up when come to LA I know where Burbank is! I think you are very talented you look like you could be a singing star, your lyrics are good the most important thing to start out! WP grecowong@yahoo.com
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    cmlestrade commented on LOVE

    07-23-2009

    No more poems on here? I was looking forward to reading more.
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    WordSlinger commented on LOVE

    07-11-2009

    Alot of truth, it would be cool, oneday it will be like this. It's good to see someone that thinks like this.
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    cmlestrade commented on LOVE

    07-09-2009

    Poetic truth, has me pondering the Ïf only. Couple of grammar issues and a bit awkward but the message is where your work finds it's strength. totally enjoyable.
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    survivor53

    07/09/2009

    I totally need an editor...grammer is not my strength and that I can't deny!

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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