Lovesick Clown

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    So those of you have read my first poem are aware this has been posted way later than I said I would post it.  Some of it is because life happened, although it's mostly because I'm lazy.  This poem is one of three I wrote while in a sculpture museum about a tiny little statuette of a clown with the same title.  I really did like using the surroundings for inspiration.  I think I might try it again on my own sometime.

    Lovesick Clown

     Slender bronze arrow
    To the heart not so funny
    Now are you Mister?

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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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