Loving You

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    • nanoboy909
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    Loving You

    Girl, listen I know it’s hard to believe

    but, it’s true.

    I’m in love with you

    and, my feelings for you will never change.

    You mean more than anything to me.

    I would do anything just to see you smile.

    Now that you’re here, I want you to stay.

    Stay in my arms in every way.

    Please baby I can’t take it no more.

    I want to be with you for sure.

    You’re the most beautiful thing that happened to me.

    Giving all I have to give to you will all be worthy.

    Holding you in my arms is all I need to go through the days.

    Everything you say I will obey.

    Giving you the love that you need is what I want to command.

    So please I want you to understand.

    Give me a chance and let me prove it.

    Because I know in my heart we can make it.

    You see it’s not about what people think and say.

    So don’t be afraid of what they say.

     

    Loving you is all I want to do.

     

    Loving you is what I got to do.


    Loving You Forever Is My Destiny.

     

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    786mona commented on Loving You

    05-22-2010

    nice write my friend! good job and u should give it to the person u wrote it for:) good job again! 10 4 u

    nanoboy909

    05/22/2010

    thanks mona.... girls love that one..... everytime i'm at poetry reading and i read that one they love it.... and it makes me happy because they're smiling....

    KristyLoren commented on Loving You

    08-23-2009

    Beautifully written and somewhere there is a very lucky lady ;)

    KAWK commented on Loving You

    08-10-2009

    Love this poem it is very good I like your sense of written I think it is very catching.I love to look at poems with passion because they inspire me I am going to write a poem but it will be based off my sense of love to a person I care deeply about.Thank you

    Louise commented on Loving You

    06-25-2009

    Beautiful poem. You have captured the essence of love in your loving words.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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