Loving You

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    • nanoboy909
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    Loving You

    Girl, listen I know it’s hard to believe

    but, it’s true.

    I’m in love with you

    and, my feelings for you will never change.

    You mean more than anything to me.

    I would do anything just to see you smile.

    Now that you’re here, I want you to stay.

    Stay in my arms in every way.

    Please baby I can’t take it no more.

    I want to be with you for sure.

    You’re the most beautiful thing that happened to me.

    Giving all I have to give to you will all be worthy.

    Holding you in my arms is all I need to go through the days.

    Everything you say I will obey.

    Giving you the love that you need is what I want to command.

    So please I want you to understand.

    Give me a chance and let me prove it.

    Because I know in my heart we can make it.

    You see it’s not about what people think and say.

    So don’t be afraid of what they say.

     

    Loving you is all I want to do.

     

    Loving you is what I got to do.


    Loving You Forever Is My Destiny.

     

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    786mona commented on Loving You

    05-22-2010

    nice write my friend! good job and u should give it to the person u wrote it for:) good job again! 10 4 u

    nanoboy909

    05/22/2010

    thanks mona.... girls love that one..... everytime i'm at poetry reading and i read that one they love it.... and it makes me happy because they're smiling....

    KristyLoren commented on Loving You

    08-23-2009

    Beautifully written and somewhere there is a very lucky lady ;)

    KAWK commented on Loving You

    08-10-2009

    Love this poem it is very good I like your sense of written I think it is very catching.I love to look at poems with passion because they inspire me I am going to write a poem but it will be based off my sense of love to a person I care deeply about.Thank you

    Louise commented on Loving You

    06-25-2009

    Beautiful poem. You have captured the essence of love in your loving words.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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