Mama Don't Die 'Til Spring

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    For my momma who lost their will to live and died in the spring

    Mama Don't Die 'Til Spring

    Mama, your body is in so much pain
    but please stay with me until spring
    I see it on your face, it's not hard to tell
    even I can see you're losing your will
    .

    Spring is when unimagined beauties become realities

    From the sights and sounds the season brings.

    The only signs that winter’s been here

    Is what you call a morning chill in the air.

    A barefoot stroll down a country lane

    Toes making music in the sand again

    Listening to the robins in tall trees

    With the buds of leaves turning green
    Waters that flows in creek beds again

    Once that had been just a frozen stream.

    Walk dirt roads made of sandy clay

    Watch animals grazing on winter’s hay

    Fields that‘s prepped can only mean,

    Time to plant crops of corn and butterbeans

    Smell of honeysuckles always in the air

    Azaleas and daffodils budding everywhere.

    Something inside me seem to come alive

    Spirits soars I seem to thrive at the coming signs.
    Mama if you must die so shall it be,

    To do it in spring would be a gift to me.

    Each time of the year when spring is here,

    Though there’ll be no reasons to cheer.

    I'll always remember it was in the spring

    When my mama left me here.

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    earthly commented on Mama Don't Die 'Til Spring

    02-17-2010

    how can a poem be sad, but also happy? I love spring-the renewal-you really described it well-I can almost smell the new buds and blooms-I will pray that your mother will enjoy spring with you...Earthly

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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