MBH

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    MBH

     March 29th
    0600

    The sun invades the night sky
    Ambushing a desolate, blood-filled land
    Overrun by melancholy
    Distant sounds echo with urgency
    A scene too eerie for a fallen angel's canvas

    A lone soul advances aimlessly
    Deeply wounded, but still capable
    Concealed scars and scabs expose experience
    Eyes overflowing, but sobs substituted by screams of agony
    And desires of quick relief
    Self worth and preservation crutches to pain's threshold

    Used weaponry, evidence of liability
    But with such devastation, declaring blame is futile
    Many have lost, few are victorious, others still enthralled
    Hope... Peace... the first two casualties

    War's aftermath? Negative... love's.
    Memoirs of a Broken Heart

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    BlackButterfly1 commented on MBH

    01-27-2011

    This is fuccin awesome!!!! Your description is that of war until I read the end...........and then I had to read it again. Very well done and a definite 10 from me. You're very talented. I look forward to reading more!
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    ShadowStealer commented on MBH

    07-24-2010

    Wow I can just imagine the scene in my head. Very descriptive! ShadowStealer P.S In the chatroom jtlove was being mean to me. (sniffle)
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    Mogli commented on MBH

    08-30-2009

    I like your word use, your very descriptive. Keep em coming!
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    rougepriest commented on MBH

    08-29-2009

    holy cow thats really really good! the scale dont go high enough to rate you so im stuck giving you a 10
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    Noj510

    08/29/2009

    thank you very much!!!

    lemuwah commented on MBH

    08-29-2009

    wow, i got goosebumps from this. I was just curious tho, does the title MBH mean something, or someone special?
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    Noj510

    08/29/2009

    MBH is actually revealed at the end of the poem, Memoirs of a Broken Heart. I didn't want to give anything away with the title or tags.

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