Me but greater

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    When i wrote this poem i was thinking of all
    the people who put me down in life and thinking
    that even though i dont have plans doesnt mean
    that i cant make something of myself
    and that if i put my mind to something
    i can accomplish it with or without support

    Me but greater

     I'm thinking
    but what am i thinking of
    I dont even know what to think about
    what is there to think about
    many things to think about of course
    but only one thing comes to my mind
    not a boy, not a friend
    not love neither, but life
    and how to live
    why to live, who to be, what i want to be
    I don't know these things yet
    but one day i will
    one day i will be something more than an average person
    I will be me but greater
    and when i am great
    i can think again back to the doubters and enemies
    not only knowing that i proved them all wrong
    but knowing i am now me but greater

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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