Memories #1

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    Memories #1

    We shared few days

    we went dancing…

    I felt a touching awake

    a balanced harmony

    thus, it didn't make sense

    to feel that way.

     

    I felt a dense cloud

    when he left

    inside, deep in my heart

    I didn't want to talk…

    I closed my eyes

    holding the unknown.

     

    Was there something lost?

    Rain... about to fall

    I looked outside

    and it was a sunny day…

    The rain came from my soul

    running through my face.

     

    Where is that man?

    Where did he come from?

    Why was the energy so strong?

    Did I meet him before?

    Many lives in the past?

    Somewhere? I’ll never know.

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    BadBadBear commented on Memories #1

    10-10-2009

    Quite an interesting work leading towards deep mystery. Excellent write.

    Rabanne928

    10/10/2009

    Thank you, BBB! English is not my mother language and I am attempting to write poetry in English for about two years. Blessings, Rabanne.

    BadBadBear

    10/13/2009

    Ahh but you're doing so well. Blessings, BBB

    california commented on Memories #1

    08-06-2009

    VERY, VERY NICE. HOPING YOU WILL WRITE SOME MORE.......? CALIFORNIA

    Rabanne928

    10/10/2009

    California, thank you very much! I appreciate your comment. Will get more frequently here... I'm pursuing my PhD in Business and have little time for this wonderful entertainment. Best regards, Rabanne

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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