Mental Crucifixion

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    Mental Crucifixion

    The fuel of emotional exhaustion suddenly emerges with the

    possibility of unproduced outgrowth. Built in inefficient 

    covering detached to me with a theme titled oppressed.

    Watching the clock waiting for minutes to evolve cheerfully,

    so I can have more time. I stand at still; combined with

    several manufactured components that yell out spiritually

    enthusiasm. Wearing unhappy characteristics from head to toe

    maintaining a sincere domestic representation. Having deep

    conversations with self to discover the within; Trying my best

    to not respond. I am the receiver of mental crucifixion and 

    with knowing this I am trying to look into the mirror and catch
     
    the reflection that resembles happiness.

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    bklynrizz commented on Mental Crucifixion

    12-22-2009

    Man! This was an incredible write. So much said. Deep emotion. The last line was awesome. I am the receiver of mental crucifixion.......resembles happiness. Deep dude really deep. Great write.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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