Mermaid's Lament

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Mermaid's Lament

Retreat, retreat to the grotto!
Back to the back,
Safe in stone.
Passerby's take what they need.
Take what they need, pass on by.
She's too much for the mortals.
She's not enough.
She's not weak enough.
Her old soul, her infant ego,
Too confusing for the passerby's.
Retreat, retreat to the grotto.
Molt again and again.
Too beautiful, too swift.
She holds her old skin, mourning.
She lays it down, so it'll wash away.
She flicks her fins and goes for a cruise,
Observing all the lovers loving.
As if she were an electric eel, no one comes close.
Retreat once more,
Clean the place up.
Pieces of dignity, pictures of old lovers, treasures from the sea,
From the see, from the seeing,
Swept clean again.
Her seahorse muse sings her to sleep,
In the grotto.

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HarverTomsson commented on Mermaid's Lament

06-08-2009

Wonderfully woven metaphors commenting on the sense of isolation depening with exposure and insight. Finding the match between too weak and too strong, finding the clarity of need past the confusion of desire. Introspective longing and wisdom mix with healing. The poem begns and ends with mystery with unsettling effect. Well done.

ValsTales

06/08/2009

Thank you for "seeing"

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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