midday
She sulked like waxMy glistening thoughts
betrayed the sllhouette
which ,
prior to dusk ,
I had cast.
Her pining
dwindled
Rekindled,
she anticipated novelty.
Prior to sunrise
unpinned hopes
one can feel
such a complete shit
in broad daylight
midday
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My glistening thoughts
betrayed the sllhouette
which ,
prior to dusk ,
I had cast.
Her pining
dwindled
Rekindled,
she anticipated novelty.
Prior to sunrise
unpinned hopes
one can feel
such a complete shit
in broad daylight
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loanslanger commented on midday
07-24-2009
- You know being on this site has exposed me to different styles of poems. This one of yours I liked, especially. Makes me think of my own life experiences. Good read.
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07/24/2009
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