pent up

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    pent up

    She was cramming
    to unload 
    that crimsome headache
    she was loosening my clinging stickiness
    and wavering
    expectant wishes
    of
    slicing through
    some cannoned reasoning 
    inflicting 
    weeping grazes
    my stumbledown pride treading
    often clad
    in 
    discarded ambition
    I feel pensionary
    my call recalls the tip of the tongue
    a fleeting lick
    plunged
    in thought
    pentasyllables 
    such 
    as inconceivable
    for tastes of the past
    until we are
    cajoled into selective fondness 
    Of course I love you darling
    i love your headaches

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    Rizz1 commented on pent up

    09-12-2009

    I believe you are more a lover then a poet. or maybe not. cheers to you and any young lady who may have a head that aches. well done.

    davidcircle

    09/13/2009

    thankyou very much i will now start again inspiration is all we need good writing to you

    IzzyGumbo commented on pent up

    05-30-2009

    del.iquent and elegant a well penned penta.ment in a joyously joyful cajol of a well sent sentiment. I envy the headache you love. :) She's a lucky gal. Wonderful and brilliant my friend!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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