mis-loved

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    this poem is for women who suffer at the hands of someone they love

    mis-loved

     Doubt has keep me frozen in place
    Denying me freedom to escape
    Fear that you'll figure it out
    and hurt me more
    Never really able to fully let go 
    hatred fills this little heart of mine
    not for you but me for being so blind
    your love was never sensitive and sweet
    because to you that was the definition of weak
    for this i was the one to suffer 
    alone and cold.. 
    your "love" grew tougher
    A punching bag, a fist to the face
    but still i was unable to get away
    this "love" that burned in my heart
    was an illusion it is a fake
    love me love me
    you raise your hand!
    Am i a fool?
    for still loving you
    walking out the door
    will i regret 
    that i left 

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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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