My Angel

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    My Angel

     Smile so bright it'll block out the light. Smile so beautiful that it'll make you bright. Looking in to your eyes I'm in a daze. Looks so perfect it will make you gaze. Lost in your beauty as if you was a goddess. Your lips so lucious, juice, and magnificent. Your curves are so describing that it'll you significent. Words can not explain how much desire you have. I think I found my better half. Looking up in the sky and I see your face. Never know can I embrace.
    Named by my Auntie love ya Nanny

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    Jenni commented on My Angel

    06-27-2009

    I feel like it has a nice sentiment, but not a structurally sound poem. Nice overall though. I don't mean anything as an insult. Your talent is there, the words are there. I just think it could have been polished up a bit. I look forward to reading more of your writing. :)
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    SmileyAngel138 commented on My Angel

    06-25-2009

    this is a beautiful poem, your use of words were perfect,,,great job :-)
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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