My Last Stand

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    My Last Stand

    Fare thee well fare thee well, I love you more than words can tell,
    I only want what's best for you, so leave me be in my own hell.
    You are a wonderful person who deserves nothing but the best,
    but I am worthless and doomed to suffer until I'm laid to rest.
    You deserve the sun and moon, and all the stars in the sky,
    and all these things I cannot give, so baby please don't cry,
    For there is someone out there who will love you like I do,
    someone who'll give you what you deserve, somone right for you.
    Someone who will take you out for long walks in the sand,
    I only want you to be happy, that's why I'm taking my last stand.
    Yes, I love and care for you from the bottom of my heart,
    but there's somone better for you, and I knew it from the start.
    You should be treated like a princess, I am nothing but a hassle,
    you deserve more than I can give, for a princess needs her castle.
    You'll know when you found Mr. Right, as you walk hand in hand,
    I can't deny you what you deserve, so I'm taking my last stand.

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    mary1644 commented on My Last Stand

    04-06-2009

    very good writing - i write very dark poetry and i've always been afraid no one would like that. i'd like to add you to my friends.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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