My Love for You
♥My Love for You♥ In this poem, I want to express my love for you My love for you is sempiternal My love for you is plenary My love for you is somewhat unexplainable, though I try My love for you makes me feel warm and alive inside My love for you is one to fight for My love for you is like none other My love for you is not comparable and shouldn’t be contrasted My love for you I wanna hold you and keep you right by my side My love for you is not one that I can hide I wanna hold your hand to keep our bond tight My love for you makes me happy like a kid on a slide I am pretty sure your love is similar, aren’t I right My love for you My love for you I want to be there with you for the rest of my life Our love is obvious, noticeable, and sharp like a knife It cuts through our troubles and depression I want to share my love with you as my wife When I hug you, you would feel my heart beat from my hug’s compression My love for you My love for you I love to hear your voice and your laugh, which is cute When hearing you, the rest of the world becomes mute When I am happy or sad either way for you, I cry Your voice and laugh is music to my ears from a flute One last question, “Will you be with me ‘till I die?” My love for you That was my poem of my love for you I could go on forever to express my love for you I would have to spend the rest of my life with you To express my love for you I LOVE YOUMy Love for You
4 Comments
- jlandi19
- i am curently in school thinking of new poems everyday........i dont always write em down but i speak poety.......i dont quite have the time to write as much as i want to
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leigh14 commented on My Love for You
03-23-2010
- i agree with super...but i love the poem.....it expresses the true extent of your love for the subject of the poem.... or the person the poem is being read to.... keep it up... great poem...
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08/03/2010
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SuperChick76 commented on My Love for You
03-10-2010
- The imagery and the phasing was very nicely done. Though if I can suggest, you probably should seperate the lines to make it easier for the reader to get the flow of your writing. Brilliantly written, a very nice love poem. Good job. :)
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03/22/2010
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Manda91 commented on My Love for You
03-10-2010
- You also are great writer. This girl is very lucky to have you.
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03/22/2010
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Laurenrose commented on My Love for You
03-08-2010
- Yes I will be with you till I die and into the heavens baby. I wanna be your wife. Thank you times a million. I cant wait to see more of your work
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03/08/2010
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