MY LOVE

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This poem was picked and published thru Poetry.com,back quite a few years ago.

chwriter

MY LOVE

I loved you from the very minute
       we met.
My heart was swept away
        beneath your's.
Can you ever forgive me for
        the times I've
Hurt you?
I dream of you at night fall,
Your with me daily
       in my thoughts.

Are you real or my imagination...?

To have found someone as you

      My friend, My love.

                    I love you!

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volcoord4u commented on MY LOVE

08-17-2009

Awesome isn't it? No love or friendship can compare~! My poem Heaven was also published with them quite a few years back and Rain on a Metal Roof a couple years ago. Looks like we have more in common than the Lord...

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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