my love

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    my love

     i was lost in love, i lost my sense too
    but suddenly you wake me up
    make me feel what is life
    and help to survive
    you gave me the courage
    to stand on my feet
    when i have recovered
    and fully on the move
    then i realize
    you actaully did teach me
    to love the life
    to love the world
    love does not mean
    to get lost
    but to get back the life
    i became so happy
    and always in a sparkling mood
    it was for you and
    only for you
    but never thought or even
    dare to think
    in exchange i have
    to lost you forever
    why and why
    you left me like this
    now i don't want to live
    without you
    my love.

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    Lolee commented on my love

    07-20-2009

    As the saying goes: Better to have loved and lost, than not to have loved at all. Just think of it as a temporary gift, my friend. good poem.
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    Jes commented on my love

    07-01-2009

    Good poem..the start was intense..But the lose of love was to quick..Poems are a story let the ending have the same amount of flare as the beginning and I would be struck..Smiling like always Jes
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    naushad

    07/12/2009

    thanks

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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