My Muse

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    • Auntieolehed
    • The blessing is in the giving, the life is in the living, with fervent love I am bringing, an open heart to you.

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    This poem was writen about a man I was interested in, He has since moved on and so have I, so the first part is the past and the second is the present. It aways hurs when someone leaves but life goes on to better things.

    My Muse

    My Muse

    When I saw you today, just a wave, a step away

    your face lit up, that made me glad,at the same time a little sad
    You made me feel just like a queen,with wealth untold and wisdoms
    glean
    So good it is to know a man. who completes a women with his glance
    You are my muse for these words, I hope you know
    I hope you heard

    I haven't seen you for a while the lost has hurt
    and cramp my style
    I'm use to being fueled by you
    a look, a stare, a smile or two
    that's okay you still give light
    my poetry will be alright

    02/19/09
    reivised 01/10/10

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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