My Sunset

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    My Sunset

    Such are the colors of my sunset.
    My clouds, the color of sweet magenta.
    Against my golden, orange, and red sun.
    My sky, a mixture of blue, purple, and crimson.
    The picture of peace.
    The painting of tranquility.
    My trees, silhouetted against the sky.
    Black and brown bodies, arms and hands lifted.
    Stretched out in praise for their life.
    To everything in its place.
    My air, warm with comfort.
    But cool with the crisp touch of love.
    Such are the physical ties of my sunset.
    Beyond a measure of beauty.
    Beyond a ray of hope.
    Extending out into all eternity.
    The universe stretched forth its forever,
    As I stare into the aspects of my sunset.

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    SILKYTWEED commented on My Sunset

    06-24-2009

    Beautifully Written, with a tight flow....I really liked "the universe stretched forth its forever", .....Thanks again for sharing!

    littleonyx

    08/12/2009

    Thank you, Silky. Sometimes my mind goes places and I don't even understand it, but write it anyway. Thanks!

    simanbar commented on My Sunset

    01-29-2009

    I can only echo the superlatives that you've evoked from all those who've read you. Your gift deserves publication; I give this a ten!

    JEAGLEFEATHER commented on My Sunset

    01-03-2009

    Once again, I sit in the warmth of your gift. You are a wordsmith. You have the knack of putting emotion to ink & paper. U change my opinion of TX! Ha! Ha!

    Plot121 commented on My Sunset

    12-31-2008

    The description on this poem was remarkable i really did like how you paited the setting with each well choosen word. A great read Robert...

    sweetangel commented on My Sunset

    11-20-2008

    hey how are you doing i hope you know that i like your poems that you wrote

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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