My Thoughts About Myself

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    My Thoughts About Myself

    My heart is cold and feels no more.
    The pain I feel I've mostly bore.
    In others eyes I see the sores.
    My love for you is truely yours.
    I've condemned my life with pain and gore.
    The blood I've shed, the blood I've poured.
    The life I live, I live for yours.
    In all reality, I live no more.

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    origionalmerlin commented on My Thoughts About Myself

    04-06-2009

    read more write more. be kind to yourself, and build better thinking about you for you... good start here

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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