My Untitled Poem

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    Written: june 2nd

    My Untitled Poem

     'Everyone's a critic',
    Everyone's greedy,
    Everyone wants love,
    And everyone's needy.

    'Everyone's a critic'; we seem to never have enough.
    Everyone's greedy; self-happiness is (wrongly) taught to be fulfilling.
    Everyone wants love; -that is sometimes unripe, forbidden and unplanned.
    And everyone's needy; independence is an act.

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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