On Bent Knees

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    On Bent Knees

    I MISS YOU MOM! (R.I.P.)
     
     Through my teary eyes of water, I've felt so much of your pain.
     But, now you suffer no more as you sit next to your father.
     It maybe selfish of me to say, I wish that you were still here,
     to talk with me and comfort me, please hold me once again.
     I miss you ever so dearly as each day passes by, but, when my
     time is up and our dear God calls me home, we will embrace
     once again in our father's heavenly sky.
     For I am your son and I carry your heart through the deep oceans
     and embedded seas, so, look upon me know mom, I miss you mom,
     I miss you, I miss you on bended knees.
     So happy we never said goodbye, for that gives me hope and gives
     me strength and it makes me want to try; To be a good man and be a
     good son and the best father I can be, but, worry not if you should see me,
     for sometimes I still cry. My eternal love from your son.

     Darrel F.

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    sherry122 commented on On Bent Knees

    02-02-2010

    Owhhh, that’s such a sweet poem, I think your mom would have been crying with joy if she read this. We all have to move forward in life, even if we sometimes wish that we could stop time and stay in our beautiful moment forever. This poem has a very sad feel, as if you’re very unhappy with your life, “make life worth living,” your mom would want you to be happy.:)

    shannie76 commented on On Bent Knees

    11-04-2009

    Very very heartfelt words to your beloved Mother. This is the greatest way to express your feelings and love. Keep writing

    icu2 commented on On Bent Knees

    11-04-2009

    I am sorry for your loss. I know it must hurt something fierce! Good job expressing yourself. Take care...it will get better.

    aliciagall commented on On Bent Knees

    11-03-2009

    These words express the undying love that you have for your mother. It's beautiful, heartfelt and as a mother very comforting to know that a child could have so much love for their parent. She is always with you as long as you keep her alive with your pen. Sorry for your lost.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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