on the Surface of Water

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  • Inspirational

    on the Surface of Water
    on the road, or in the streets
    reflections I catch in people I meet
    on the Surface of Water
    getting caught in a web
    strive 2 survive
    a soul 2 old 2 be dead, yet...
    2 many times I concidered quittin'.
    Now I'm leaving the past behind,
    my future is
    unwritten

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    mamasan commented on on the Surface of Water

    11-11-2009

    Yes, I guess your just barely getting your toes wet but you have a clear vision. Yes, your future is unwritten but please plan to make good intentions so that there will be both joy and bliss as your reward for good decisions. Lots of the best of whatever is the best for you. Enjoy.,,,,,,,,,,,
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