ONE TIME

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    ONE TIME



    One look into her eyes my heart sped up my mind went numb.

    Who is this person with such power over me

    The things I felt were so unreal, Unsure of what to do I sat and stared.

    Finally visions of beauty rushed my thoughts

    her eyes her hair her mouth her skin

    It was all there in vivid images streaming through my mind

    Our hands locked, our lips pressed together, our bodies intertwined as one

    All this happened even before I said hello

    The unrelenting pressure in my stomach made me queasy

    I knew love like this could never be so easy

    The time had come; there she was in front of me

    The purest feeling I have never known

    Finally I said hello she said the same

    That day I knew my life would be forever changed

    Cause for this girl I would give it all

    My soul my love my life

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    Zyon commented on ONE TIME

    06-23-2009

    I like how you explained your defintion of love at first sight per se.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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