True Love?

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    True Love?
    This thing you call true love

    does it truly exist

    or is just some sick fantasy

    there to make the things we do ok

    does it make it ok for you to rip apart my heart & soul

    does it make it ok for you to be in his loving embrace

    when it is I who truly loves you

    will I ever experience this love I have for you

    No! for this love has truly turned to pain

    with the setting sun I shed a single tear

    with the drop of the tear so is my love dissolved

    and never again will I believe in something so false as love.

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    Louise commented on True Love?

    07-01-2009

    I feel your pain. Love hurts sometimes. Sometimes we love the people that don't love us back. True love does exist, but it takes time to find a love that is mutual. Sometimes we search for love in all the wrong places or with the wrong people.
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    Miriam commented on True Love?

    02-20-2009

    this is a very sad and hopeles poem but very well written.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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