ONE WHO MOVES MY SOUL

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    ONE WHO MOVES MY SOUL

    YOU ARE SO VERY SEXY
    SENSUAL TO THE TOUCH
    JUST TO SPEAK YOUR NAME
    SAYS SO VERY MUCH

    WE TALK ABOUT SO MANY THINGS
    I FEEL SO COMFORTABLE WITH YOU
    LOOKING DEEP INTO YOUR EYES
    SHARING PASSION SO VERY TRUE

    WHEN I SPEAK YOUR NAME
    A MILLION ANGELS SING
    WHEN I FEEL YOUR BODY
    YOU RULE ME LIKE A KING

    I LOVE THE WAY WE SHARE THINGS
    AND WHEN YOU READ MY MIND
    GIVES ME DEEP UNDERSTANDING
    THE DIRECTION WE’RE MOVING IS FINE

    I WANT YOU AS MY BEST FRIEND
    THAT IS THE MAJOR GOAL
    A DEEPNESS THAT’S SO CLOSE
    OF ONE WHO MOVES MY SOUL

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    phatdaddee commented on ONE WHO MOVES MY SOUL

    08-13-2009

    Great write! The rhyme pattern is wonderful and the content is good! I truly enjoyed this!

    MZQUEENB

    08/14/2009

    I am glad you enjoyed my poem, keep the comments coming and thank you very much....Beverly

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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