Only Hoping

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This poem is to the lonely moment. The one that I only hope will last.

Only Hoping

Stabbed by the life I lead,
Not a moment to waste,
This wound stays open,
Will it heal?
Or will this moment stay broken,
Never to the moment will I hope,
Only hope to heal,
Another broken moment still,
And life moves on,
Without me here!

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dumplin commented on Only Hoping

11-18-2009

short and sweet. nice flow.......................

charlesdarling

11/18/2009

Thank you for the comment it was extraordinary!

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