An Outside Dream
Sitting and wondering,Along the only road,
This is where I,
Only go to,
After the affect of life,
At its best is,
Nevertheless my dream,
Now a dreamer,
All dreamed out, cloudy,
The mist fits in,
My dream so big!
An Outside Dream
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Tags: Inspirational
Poem Commentary
This is to the dreamer in life this time. The only way to read through the lonely times is to dream. Someway to get ourselves through. I thank you all for reading this.Along the only road,
This is where I,
Only go to,
After the affect of life,
At its best is,
Nevertheless my dream,
Now a dreamer,
All dreamed out, cloudy,
The mist fits in,
My dream so big!
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SuperChick76 commented on An Outside Dream
11-12-2009
- Nice imagery, I must say. I like the different "painting" you drew, it's something I do myself, I always find it comes out nicely. I like the dreamlike state your poem has. All in all, I believe your feelings came across beautifully. It did seem just a little confusing, but, then again, many of my own are most likely confusing, so, judge not lest I be judged myself, LOL. But, seriously, though, nicely written. Nicely structured. Good job =)
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11/13/2009
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