Our Love

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Our Love

The day we proclaimed our love

I opened my heart and let if fill
without a fight

Cause surely God sent it down to me
from above

The Angels watched in awe
at the beautiful sight

And the Devil looked up with jealousy
and envy

For he himself has never tasted
a love so great

I stand here between Heaven and Hell
knowing this love is all for me

And neither could break this fate

Cause our love is a whole new paradise

Neither can suffice 

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blackfootlady commented on Our Love

03-15-2010

Ty for sharing your poem with me.....Nice write....CHURV

starfox115 commented on Our Love

03-02-2010

i love the poem, just that the way you space it makes it seem not to be a poem. its good thought

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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