Over it

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    Over it

    What was i thinking? He could never be the right one for me. I'm shy, he never cares about the clothes he wears.
    I hoped and i prayed, but no luck ever comes to those who wait. Now i, now i need to see the bright side of things. This will never hold me down. I am free to fly all around the world. I just have one thing to say. I'm over it.
    He doesn't know. I see him everyday, and he never talks about me. I take a deap breath and i say.
    I hoped and i prayed, but no luck ever comes to those who wait.Now i, now i have to see the bright side of things. this will never hold me down. I'm free to fly all around the world. I just have one thing to say. I'm over it.
    SO OVER IT!

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    hdmac commented on Over it

    09-13-2009

    Capitalize your "i"s because it distracts the reader. Honest words though.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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