my journey

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    my journey
    As i walk through the wet, mossy forest i can hear the faint padding of the forest floor as i walk aimlessly because of him. He tore my very soul from me when he left. He left quietly, almost unnoticed, but not by me; my friends didn't realize. They just didn't care. As the pain begins enrape me, and i begin to realize that he is gone forever, the forest gets greener, gets thicker and the trail becomes thinner. When will my journey, this painful, unfair journey end?

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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

    poetryqueen09’s Poems (17)

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