Pain

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Pain

How could I have been so wrong
To love someone that leaves so long
Never knowing when or where
And never being there
Time goes by as I wait
With his food upon a plate
Sitting here
But never near
I feel so empty
Why do I care
I care cause love is the key
Why is he trying to flee
I give my soul
Only to be let go
My time here is almost gone
Never will i sit and wait
Because it is way to late

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BrokenHeart2009 commented on Pain

01-12-2011

I like the rythym of this poem, the writing is longing for the love that she knows is done. However, she is accepting with notion she has to move on.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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