Paradox

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    Paradox

    Lose your humanity

    Leave it at my door

    Lock it up in my closet

    Let it trouble you no more

     

    Understand the deception

    Uncover the lies

    Unlock the hidden secrets

    Underneath the ties

     

    Gather all your courage

    Give me all your fears

    Govern your insecurities

    Get rid of your tears

     

    Heaven is waiting for you

    Hurry to its hall!

     

    Hell is waiting for you

    How will you answer its call?

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    Paolo commented on Paradox

    06-06-2009

    Paradox is an interesting title for this piece. Perhaps it is me but I am unable to see it. There are lines here that are interesting and have me wanting to know more about the voice. I like the "hidden secrets underneath the ties" an image new to me. Then the next three stanza's diminish the cleverness of the preceding stanza and therefore for me the voice seemed lost and on to something else. Would I read this again, no, not in it's current form.
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