parents that care
parents that care and love you and care for you my childhood was very great and my parents that care for me and love me we was not rich but my parents try there best too get stuff for use and sometimes that they did not get them i was very mad and i shoulded be happy but i was not i put my parents through alot of trouble things when i was young and now i don't have one of my parents my father died on dec, 25/1987 and i was only 18 years old when my father passed away but my father care for all of his children and i took a real advangage of my father and now my father is gone and i feel very sad and upset about cause of what i did when i was young i wish i can take it back but i can't but i am a better person now i don't take advangage of my parent that is still around i don't take advangage of anyone no more i love my parent that is still around and care for her very much now i have kids of my own and now i know what my parents what through when i was a child but my parents always loved use very much and now since iam a adult now i grow up for the best not the worst now i am really there for my mother now since my father is not here but now i can be there for my mother now and iam going too be a better person from now and forever for my family.parents that care
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the care of parents
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Chaos128 commented on parents that care
06-09-2010
- Realizing our mistakes is the first step toward toward redemption, JT. We can't change the past, but we can learn from it to make the future better. I can understand your regrets, but don't let guilt be a weight that holds you down and keeps you from rising higher. A lot of emotion went into this work and it shows.
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Sydney commented on parents that care
06-07-2010
- im sorry what had happened. this is also good. but it would also be good in verses like "A Lost of a family". Sydney
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KING commented on parents that care
06-05-2010
- When did you write this. (i know you wrote t up here now) Did you write this as a child? Or right after you went through the things you went through?
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