Passionate love

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    Passionate love

    Everywhere I go,whatever I do
    I can see you standing there waiting for me to go
    I tried to forgive and forget the past for good
    And all of the memories we shared to moved.
    But the feelings that I had before for you,my love
    Is like a bubble that pop out the wind and goes.

    Thank you for keep on trying to express what you feel
    We both know that we are just wasting our time my dear
    The sun still rising and the moon still coming
    And we have the chance to do what we really want to
    Like to move on and face the new world through.

    I can feel you,I did understands you at last
    But we cannot continue this love from the past
    We both know that it is not easy to ease the pain we had
    But think of it that this is the best way to do for both of us.

    We can be friends and hang out sometimes
    Share our problems and thoughts to kill the time
    I can be your best friend and you can be my best friend
    You can always call me anytime you needs me
    But I cannot give my heart back to you at all
    Because I love someone that is better than you.



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    wildpendigus commented on Passionate love

    06-22-2009

    sound very good like a real pssionate poem, it would make a great love song a slow ballad, with the right music and production it could have many possibilities, you have a lot of talent! grecowong@yahoo.com

    Spiralout1022 commented on Passionate love

    04-24-2009

    its a very easy premise to get behind, grammatically not sound, but i can 100% percent relate to this in every way. good read

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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