Perfection

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    Poem Commentary

    This is a real life experience and thank God I had the extreme pleasure of looking at and touching the most beautiful creation body-wise I have ever seen. Her skin was flawless at 36 and there was no sag. Flat stomach,  breast and tush defined gravity legs stong and muscular. I couldn't wait to share her with my poetry family.  I hope you enjoy her.

    Perfection

    Have you ever seen perfection?

    Have you ever seen its face?

    I have last night in revelation,

    A perfect naked body without scar or trace.

     

     

    I stared in astonishment,

    Searching desperately for blemish or mar,

    And to my utter amazement,

    Believe me, I looked near and far.

     

     

    From head to toe,

    Not even one.

    She was strong and muscular,

    She was definitely built for fun.

     

     

    I asked her how she did it,

    How she defied gravity at thirty-six.

    She said “I stay toned and fit”

    What a night and interesting mix.

     

     

    Her beautiful body glistened,

    With the oil I deeply rubbed,

    Her soft moans I did listen,

    This job I truly loved.

     

     

    Perfection was her birthright,

    She was born to carry it.

    Every pore of her was tight,

    Stunned, shocked my lip I bit.

     

     

    Have you ever seen perfection?

    Have you ever seen its face?

    I have last night in revelation,

    A perfect naked body without scar or trace.

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    wwjd72 commented on Perfection

    08-19-2009

    FINALLY A MIND THAT SAYS IT AND LEAVES SOMETHING TO IMAGINE ! TENDERLY GUIDED SO TO MARINATE! BRAVO!!!!!

    JDSitton commented on Perfection

    07-27-2009

    This one is interesting... What I want to know is if you shared this with your 36 year old beauty... she should hear your praise!

    miwall513

    07/28/2009

    absolutely.

    AlexaLove954 commented on Perfection

    07-27-2009

    touche'....I hope when I am 36 I will be able to say that someone has met perfection...

    miwall513

    07/27/2009

    God i am getting excited just thinking about her

    786mona commented on Perfection

    07-26-2009

    hahahP) cool poem:) :)

    miwall513

    07/27/2009

    thanks 786 have you done anything new lately when you do let me know

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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