Poem of Christ

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My 12 yr old daughter wrote this a couple weeks ago. i have known she was a poet for many years, but I have to admit, this one blew even me away. She did it completely independent, with no help with language, etc.

Poem of Christ

People. Trees. Nature, wide.

You are thy creator of all.

People. Hear me out. Thy lord

Is here. He has always been here.

Maybe you don't realize it yet.

But the Lord of all creation is among us.

Every hour and minute.

Every day and week and month and year.

To come. Praise thy Lord in truth.

Praise him in kindness.

One day, a baby was born. Jesus.

Jesus is the son of they Lord.

Mary, a virgin, is his mother.

Jesus is the One to die on the cross for our sins.

Jesus is everywhere. God is everywhere. Believe. Believe.

For thy Lords trust is the best trust you may ever get.

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Kingwebstar commented on Poem of Christ

01-11-2013

Amen very truthful write Christ is the way out of this darkness. Nothing gets through to the father but through Him. Great and inspiring write. KinG

Apple29

01/11/2013

Thank you! she is truly gifted, but i AM a little biased:)

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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