potential lover

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potential lover

She doesn't see me,
yet I watch with such intensity,
Can't pretend that she
doesn't intrigue me.

At this moment shes my world
and I have never entered hers.
dont wana waste the visual
with a innapropriate converse

the image I have of this woman before me
swirls in my head and becomes a story,
reality may prove this goddes would bore me
so I keep my headdown so that she can ignore me.

your lips move in pastel
and your hips watercolored,
eyes that can cast spells
and a smile like no other

if ever the courage was found to approach her
no telling what the future might bring
might get discourage or hot as a toaster
or pehaps be buying a ring

for now Il just smile
and watch for awhile
thinking of one thing or another
its better sometimes, to just let it be,
a thought, a potential lover

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KtIrish commented on potential lover

12-09-2009

I really like this. It's very well written and the subject matter is light with a thoughtful undertone. Kudos Dtalks.

countrypoet commented on potential lover

12-09-2009

This is a very beautifully written and interesting poem.I have expereienced this a few times in my life and have learned that when I see an interesting woman that I would like to meet,I go and talk to her.Perhaps we will just have a pleasant conversation or perhaps it could develop into something more. As the saying goes nothing ventured nothing gained.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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