pure bliss

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    pure bliss

     how do i sum up the words of how you make me feel

    could it be Sensual for the way you kiss my lips

    Passion for the way you pull me close

    Lust for the way you look into my eyes or could it be Fulfilled.

    fullfillment from the your manhood stroking my opening, demanding entrance

    from the way our tongues danced to a rhythm all of its own
    or maybe your hands had its own instructions to touch my entire body leaving it wanting more

    how do i sum up the words of how you make me feel..............
    oh yeah, i know

    PURE BLISS

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    phatdaddee commented on pure bliss

    11-01-2010

    I physically felt your presence in my mind throughout this poem. It seemed soo long for such a short poem and the words you chose were perfect......"Demanding Entrance" Wow that one pulled me in deeeeep, so deep! Thank you thak you thank you! Lol!
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    BlaQReign commented on pure bliss

    10-16-2009

    Pure Bliss, Indeed...When a connection is made, and the feelings are shared, then, Love making takes place...Enjoyed this piece...BlaQ's Soul
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    cliftondurant commented on pure bliss

    07-29-2009

    to feel love completely is great when two people are in love it' a great feeling good job
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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