Queen Of Hearts

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  • Love
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  • Emotional
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  • Life
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  • Lost Love
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  • Passion
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  • Fantasy

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    to Jack, who crowned me his Queen of Hearts in August 2007

    Queen Of Hearts

     I am the fairest in the land
    The one who owns the sea
    The pink flamingos in my hand
    Will seldom bother me 

    Either slightly curving at the top
    Or pulsing bleeding red
    I'll redirect you with the crown
    Atop my royal head

    You may still love me now and then
    But while we are apart
    I'll love you now and forever still
    Your loyal Queen of Hearts 

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    HalfAwake commented on Queen Of Hearts

    11-30-2011

    This is a beautiful poem. It's interesting that you speak about love and reference Alice in Wonderland. The two are similar. Great Job!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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