"lost love"

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    "lost love"

    how long will the pain last he wanted to know with tears in his eyes his emotions were low the years he had spent and the love they once shared now all the dreams shattered had him going no where paths he had taken wrong roads he went down were misguided directions pointing to lost and found a smile here and there where it came from who knows for deep with inside him his struggle was slow so the years will all pass and the pain will still show for the love that he lost has stolen his soul feeling less like a man as passion turns into fear he wonders what lies ahead will love ever be near it will take him some time to feel love once again with support from his family and best wishes from friends

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    bilee commented on "lost love"

    09-23-2009

    I enjoyed it very much, it had flow, rythm, and it definitely wasnt lengthy.

    OutcastAmber commented on "lost love"

    09-23-2009

    Very nice poem. It has a very sad meaning deep down. Where i could relate to what you wrote about

    Chrissaye commented on "lost love"

    05-25-2009

    i love it. showed so much emotion and imagry. i think that everyone has felt this way. and everyone can agree with it.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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