"Promise me"

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    • tearskiss28
    • love: beautiful begining,destructive ending.

    "Promise me"

    I just sit here and wonder
    how my life would be without you.
    When i should be wondering
    how on earth did I get you.
     
    When I really think about it,
    I'm so lucky to have you because
    I know my life would be empty without you.

    So if you tell me you love me
    I believe what you say.
    Just remember to tell me every single day.
    So if I trust you with my heart,
    Promise me you won't tear it apart.
    Promise me you'll never say goodbye
    Just promise me you'll love me forever, and if ask you
    "Will you ever leave me ?"
    Your answer would be "Never".
    ♥♥♥♥♥

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    cagle64 commented on "Promise me"

    06-23-2009

    Oh the joy of young love how i remember that. it ireminds me of my first as well.
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    AbysmalGoddess commented on "Promise me"

    06-14-2009

    A true proclamation of love, it's really sweet and expressive of emotion, a plea of exceptance and affection. Nicely done.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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