"THE MAN OF MY DREAMS"

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    "THE MAN OF MY DREAMS"

     WHEN I LOOK AT YOUR FACE

    I SEE THE MAN OF MY DREAMS

    TALL, DARK, & BROWN EYED



    WHEN I LISTENED 2 U SPEAK

    YOUR VOICE CAPTIVATES ME

    DEEP & SOOTHING

    JUST LIKE I IMAGINED IT 2 BE



    WHEN I REFLECT ON YOUR WORDS

    YOUR INNER THOUGHTS

    I CAN ONLY SIT BACK

    AND RECOGNIZE WHAT THE LORD HAS WROUGHT



    U ARE BEAUTIFUL

    PHYSICALLY & SPIRITUALLY

    YOU'RE EVERYTHING I WISHED 4 U 2 BE

    2 PUT IT SIMPLY

    THE MAN OF MY DREAMS



    TJS

    7/02/09

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    fred1932 commented on "THE MAN OF MY DREAMS"

    12-29-2009

    Hey baby, I'm just flowing my way through giving responses since God has blessed me with your thoughts. This is very beautiful, I don't see where you skipped a line. Can't tell, once again, sweetie this is beautiful
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    optimistic commented on "THE MAN OF MY DREAMS"

    07-29-2009

    Simple delicate poem at work for a cause and mission to make a valid point on one that you care so dearly aboutl, another Great write.
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    JamilahAyanna commented on "THE MAN OF MY DREAMS"

    07-21-2009

    Very cute I loved dis it wuz simple yet very endeering.....
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    SILKYTWEED commented on "THE MAN OF MY DREAMS"

    07-20-2009

    Beautiful Write...very strong and soothing devotional piece, to the man of your dreams, I really enjoyed this piece...Thanks for Sharing....ONE!
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    poetress77

    07/20/2009

    i thank u 4 reading both poems, u are a sweetheart. I kinda messed this one up, I left one line completely out & misprinted another word, but your rating is appreciated lol. I wish they would let u edit it still, oh well

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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