"What Is It About You?"

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    "What Is It About You?"

    What is it about you that I love so much?
    What's wrong with me? Why don't I feel close enough?
    You, why can't I ever get enough of?
    You do things for me all the time
    I always do the best I can to do everything I can for you
    But, you just go on, like you don't have a care or worry on your mind
    When yo get home from work, usually aroung five
    I always have supper fixed and ready for you, things you like
    You always seem like you're a burst of energy, until we go to bed at night
    Early in the morning, I get up at four
    Before I wake you up, I always have breakfast ready and your coffee poured
    I get you up at five, weekday mornings. Sometimes, you son't eat much and at other times you eat more
    I have your lunch ready and packed, ready to go
    As I make your lunch, I usually slip into your lunch box, a little note
    Off to work yo go, after a good-bye kiss. Then, I'm always looking forward to yo coming home
    What is it about you I love so much?
    You are everything I ever dreamed of and so much more!
    More than anyone could ask for!

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    Bwyn commented on "What Is It About You?"

    01-22-2009

    Your emotions are all over the place. Just like the confused women that we all can be at times. I really enjoyed this:)

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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