Rain

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Rain

It makes noise as it falls.
It surrounds itself with gray clouds.
At times you dont want it around
At times you like hearing its sounds.
Sometimes it can compare to what a person feels like,when its dark and gloomy it can mean a person somewhere feels the the same.
I like to listen to the rain and watch it when i am sad or when im depressed.
I love the sounds the rain makes as it hits the ground or a window.
A cloud is like a person,the rain is its tears, when it cries it pours,i wish i could be a cloud at times so when i cry i can make it rain as well.




                                                                           2009

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ThugsAngel commented on Rain

06-18-2009

That was a beautiful poem. Loved it!! ILoved it!!

MizBlaze commented on Rain

06-18-2009

Oh the simplicity and the slyness of the message makes me grin :) It's creep-move was STEALTH! Loved it....LOVED IT.

blacspyder

06/18/2009

thank you mizblaze a wonderful poet you are

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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